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  • Listening to: ICP/Kottonmouth Kings
  • Reading: DeadPool, Authority, Alan Moore, old trades!
  • Watching: Futurama, Ugly Americans, Adventure Time, MLP...
  • Playing: nothing....
  • Eating: Complete crap!
  • Drinking: Aways Coca Cola!
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Prologue: Hot Texas Wasteland Nights
Characters: Rich Business Man(not named yet), Miss. Noh(zombie queen and lover to PR), Creepy Clerk(works for mutants), Zombies/Mutants, Dead Driver(murdered by the business man shortly before the story begins), and PackRat(gaint mutant rat man/"hero").
Setting(s): In a west Texas wasteland mostly, an old motel, and flashes of a futuristic California or New York(not sure yet)
Mood/Tone(s): Creepy, Suspense, Horror, Shock, and Terror... And finally Comedy!
Time Frame: It takes place over 1-3 Days at most.
POV(s): 3rd person most likely PackRat.
Plot Summery: A business man is running from the "Police Force" and try to escape down into South America so he can try to escape to the "The Other Nation" with stolen money, data, ect. And, he runs into wasteland mutants/zombies at an old motel in the middle of nowhere in West Texas.
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  • PR saves the business man from torture by Miss. Noh only to torture him worse as part of his bounty.
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Chapter 1: Night at the Inferno
Characters: PackRat(protagonist), Angelik(PR's mate an angelic cat-girl), PRR63/Ella Diabla(demonic succubus possessed clone of PR), Bradley O'Brien(An Irish goblin and PR's friend, manager, and weapon-smith),  
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Prologue: Set just before the main story we fallow a rich mid-late thirties businessman on the run driving a steadily breaking down limo in a desert. We learn through his in monologue some bit of this worlds history such as this is taking place some time in the 2400-2600's and it is post 2 World Wars, the outing of fairy tale creatures, an alien arrival, a zombie outbreak, and a few new world orders. We learn that this man was caught sailing weaponry and info to a foreign enemies of the city-state he's from(a future New York City) and now he is wanted by the authorities and a local crime family mafia.
We also learn that since then he has killed his driver due to mounting paranoia and has taken over driving and is now lost in the desert wastelands in-between the walled off states of New York and Texas on his way to South America where he hopes to get a boat to the nation he was caught sailing weaponry to for protection.
When his limo finally breaks down from a mixture of his inability to drive and running out of gas. The man abandons it in the sand and is left dragging 3 huge gym bags full of cash money, papers, documents, and CDs til around dark he comes across a shady old tourist trap style motel in the middle of nowhere. There he runs into the creepy old desk-clerk, pays for a room and goes to rest for the night, and he thinks he is safe. But, he wakes up just a few hours later around midnight or so to find that he's been captured by a tribe of zombie/mutants(not sure what to actually call them but they're un-dead and some are deformed) they have him tied-up nude to an old bed. From his inner monologue we learn the history of these mutant/zombies as he knows it. Here we meet the leader of these zombie/mutants a woman in her late thirties early forties who is introduced nude in a bathtub full of embalming fluid. She's called "Ms. Noh" because she's wearing a Noh mask. She proceeds to monologue about how beautiful she was before she "died" then removing her mask showing that even though she is perfectly preserved from the neck down her head is mummified. She processed to do a whole dominatrix routine on the guy and this goes on with-in thee story for hours til morning. 
As soon as the sun comes up a knock comes to the motel room and Ms. Noh sends one of her minions to answer it when the door comes flying off the hinges killing the minion. And, in steps our main character PackRat armed with his hammer and shield. He knows Ms. Noh and tells her to call off her minions before he kills them all. She complies and they talk a bit and come to an agreement in-which PackRat gets the businessman for the bounty on his head. The guy is grateful that he's getting away from the zombies when PR reveals that he the bounty he took for him wasn't the one issued by the police but the crime family and there were stipulations for it. And this story ends with the man's screams being heard fro outside the motel...

1.) This chapter picks right up after the Prologue with PackRat driving back to his home after dropping off what was left of the businessman to a station setup for bounty-hunters to turn in their bounties for money. Through PR's inner dialogue we'll learn since the States are now only in a low level Union because of the vast wastelands in-between each of the major areas these stations were setup for prisoner transfers for out of state criminals. Also, in the backseat of his vehicle just to let the audience know what he done to the man we can see bloody towels and bits of meat including fingers and toes and possibly a tongue.
On his way back home we learn a bit about PR such as his routines, job, and how long he's been around. Once he gets home we learn his place is a shady club/bar in the middle of this small East Texas town that he protects from the wasteland inhabitants in return for them allowing him and his followers to stay there un-harassed. 
Once inside we see it is a strip club/bar where we are introduced to his friend and oldest partner Bradley O'Brien an Irish Goblin who is his manager, mechanic, weapon-smith, and the paperwork guy. PackRat gives him the check the bounty and ask him if "Angie and Diabla have gone on yet" to which he is delighted that he is not too late before taking his seat in-front of the stage.
Here we meet Angelik the Angelic Catgirl(PR's mate) and Ella Diabla the Succubus(the 2's mutual girlfriend) as they do a live strip show. We learn here a little bit about Angelik and Ella from PR's inner thoughts like how long he's known them and why he likes them so much before he's interrupted by noticing he's being stared at from across the room. The person staring at him is a larger man in a trench-coat and PR knows something is up simply by the fact he is completely ignoring the show on stage to be watching him. PR calls Bradley over and gets him to send one of the bouncers over to check the guy out. This causes a scene which is all the evidence/provocation PR needs to attack the guy. But to his surprise the guy isn't a normal human. He is a member of the superhuman world police force(Still haven't decided on a name for them yet) who has come there for PR. The 2 of them fight going through walls and ending up in the parking lot of the club, the middle of the streets, and finally the middle of the town before the 2 have had enough. And the Officer reveals his purpose in coming after PR and that is to recruit/draft him. End of Chapter 1!

2.) This chapter opens up with where the last one left off with PR and this Officer of the superhuman world police standing in the middle of the rubble of their fight. The officer tells him that the organization he belongs to has been aware of him for years now and have finally decided it was time to recruit/draft him in. He proves this by sharing some info on PR that no one should know and this info is also used as a threat against him if he doesn't comply. (I was thinking it should be his killings he's committed in the past and war crimes he did during the wars) PR agrees to come along peacefully and quietly but only if his team comes along too. The Officer reluctantly agrees.
He takes them all back to the headquarters in his special vehicle(I love to make homages to stuff I like from movies and comics in this so I was thinking of making it a flying car like the ones used in old SHIELD comics from Marvel). The headquarters is a giant floating fortress high above the cloud-line in the sky. Once they dock we see how much better off these super-beings live on this floating fortress as the place is very ornately designed on the inside like the elevator PR and the others take from the docking bay the main lobby/hall of the place is the size of the average apartment most common people live in and has stuff in it like a chandelier(sp?) and a fish tank. (Before they get to the elevator though I'd like a scene for comedy for the most part in-which the Officer ask PR to relinquish all his weapons before they go any deeper into the fortress. And we see him pulling all these knives, throwing stars, tiny guns from poaches and hidden places on him before he reveals one of his main powers the ability to store weapons inside his body and he gives up his swords, hammer, shield, and main guns.) Once we reach the main hall we see crowds of mutated(in a good way... somewhat) super-beings all in brightly colored costumes and all around them are hundreds of booths and kiosk as this main hall is basically a really large airport like terminal/super-mall setup with restaurants and stores. 
The Officer leads them through the crowds to a large door marked "Secure Personal Only" that leads them to a secret elevator that is much more smaller and more a sterile classic generic type. It takes them to another classic and generic darkly lit room where we meet the leaders of this police force. I'm thinking somewhere between 7 ans 13 members and making most of them either archetypes based of like the Avengers or Justice League. They all introduce themselves and we learn one member of this council is in-fact Angelik's dad as the rep for their people in the organization.
From there we get them revealing what they know on PR and why they want him to join them. They reveal through their research that they've figured out that PR is an escaped earlier attempt at creating a super-soldier back in WW2in the 1940s like them but through unknown means was transported into the past explaining why he is so long lived and yet has a bunch of modern abilities. (I'd have the Iron Man/Batman style character would reveal through a bunch of pseudoscience speech how he figures it happened) Then they discuss why they want him to join. That they believe there is another like him out there and "it" is the one leading the opposition(a modern Nazi-like party that resides in a the world's largest walled off area that takes up most of Eastern Europe and Asia). They reveal that they hope to use PR's abilities to sneak in and try to bring down this opponent from the inside as the way this leader has things set up in this mega-country only super-beings can exist there and only those with high power levels. Most notably due to there are no direct entries into the wall you need a teleporter (machine or being with that power to get in)
We end on a blurred satellite image of this tyrant and it is a large(10-12 foot tall) armored being but the most notable thing is a small gap in the armor around one of the joints shows a tiny bit of green skin...

3.) PackRat agrees to stay and do the job but he has conditions(such as he wants tenure/rank and that his crew and him all get to join and get their own living quarters to themselves. Also, he wants a few of his fellow bounty hunters to be brought in from Earth such as 2 other characters I created Scorpia and Cancer the Zodiac sisters) to which the council all agree some of them more reluctantly than others(Angie's dad). From here the council leave them to be lead off to begin their induction into the corp.
Bradley and PR are lead off for the male test and Angie and Ella are taken for the female testing. This sequence would be mostly comical as we'd get to see different things ranging from them doing a physical on them both(Brad and PR) to testing their power and weakness levels. Such as Bradley not liking being poked and prodded during the physical and PR's not caring one bit. A scene of the doctor/scientist in-charge of running the test on PR being in shock of his physiology as he has basically like twice-three times as many bones and organs in his body as a human. We get them testing his powers and him showing what he can do so we learn things like PR's ability to teleport is powerful but it has a major draw back in that it causes him terrible pain to do so, his healing ability works very slowly, and that he has a severe allergy to heavy metals. And, we learn from PR's inner dialogue he was holding back on some test and he didn't reveal everything he can do because knowledge is power. 
After we're done with the montage of test on the guys all of PR's crew are gathered back together in a waiting room waiting for their test results and for them to finish up with Bradley when PR notices that Angie is acting nervous, but she won't say way. When Bradley returns it is announced they all passed the test required to be allowed in for the most part even though they wouldn't allow some into combat anytime soon hinting heavily to Angie, but PR ignores it as her dad's interference. 
From here they're lead to their quarters and PR is shocked and a little annoyed to see that in the time it took them from agreeing to join and the test they've gone through that the organization has moved all his stuff from his place back on Earth up to the fortress.
The chapter ends with Angie stating she doesn't want to share their bed that night...

4.) This chapter opens with the crew being woken up early the next day. PR has opted to sleep by himself and allow Angie and Ella to have the bed as per her request the night before. PR is annoyed from a mixture of this and being woke up so early. They're being woke up because their new uniforms are ready and they're expected to meet up with the trainers to get started on more test to see what fields they'll be best suited for. PR takes the uniforms and starts making changes to them before handing them over to their others and they get ready.
They are ready and meet up in a training are awaiting where we see what PR has done to the suits. Most trimmed up the girl's suits and his own. The drill instructors aren't pleased with this but bight the bullet for the most part since they've got orders from above to treat this group with kid-gloves because of PR's demands. 
We fallow PR as he goes through more test and see how good and bad he is at some thing like his swordsman ship is not up to par he just uses them more as giant meat cleavers and has no real former training with them and that the more well trained swordsmen can easily disarm him in strait combat, but he is a decent marksman but not a good sniper. We also see he is not a trained in any forms of martial arts (also has anger issues) and that a real trained combatant could take him is he doesn't cheat. The only reason he's wins a lot of hand to hand fights is mostly thanks to his higher than average strength and his physiology allowing him to have higher endurance. (Basically I want him owning a few of the new and some more senior recruits he is placed with in this training but getting his ass kicked by the instructors and masters in these respected fields... maybe having the Batman-esk analogue be one of them. The only time he lands a hit on him is when he just looses his cool completely and powers through an attack but even then all he does is maybe scratch his cheek.)
After all that we cut to PR's crew gathering at one of the restaurants in the main hall areas for breakfast/lunch. They're talking about how some like it up here and PR is annoyed he agreed to stay when another member of the higher ups maybe another council members shows up to take them on a further tour of the place. Mostly they're doing this to help relax them to the place and they're aware of how PR is starting to resent them on this 1st day so they're calling off the rest of the day's test and training.
He/she(not sure which one to use yet but there is a part I want to include and I might put it in this part of the story and it requires a female member and a lesbian... basically a Wonder Woman analogue. I want a scene where he tries hitting on her and she is a powerhouse member with like very high strength levels and he annoys her to the point she punches him through a few walls.) takes them deeper into the inner-workings of the fortress. She takes them through the prison to show them the types of people they'll be going up against and here is where we get a scene I've wanted to do too where one of the prisoners tried to grab one of the girls(Ella and Angie to be precise) and PR snaps the guy's arm and nearly tries removing it before he;s stopped. 
Then we get to see cold storage and see "super-villains" so terrible they are kept frozen and are being reprogrammed ala "Demolition Man" style while they're asleep. Here the guild kind of not so suddenly hints at this is where PR might end up if he didn't agree to work with them. While here also we're introduced sort of to some of the main enemy's creations like more advanced super-beings that are more monstrous than anything we've seen so far.
Lastly we see on this tour is something that does 100% show us that this Police Force is not as noble as they like to act as past the cold storage we go into a special room that is revealed to be just outside part of the engine room where is kept a special case super-being/mutation. A 12-15 year old boy who is the offspring of 2 powerful super-beings that was born with a speedster ability(he can run really fast like almost light speed) and an infinite amount of energy, but was born with severe mental problem that has left him for the most part brain dead so he is always running at top speed. So they basically made him into a power source to run the ship running on a large treadmill...

5.) This chapter is the 1st to break away from PR and his friends and what is happening with them. It is the 1st to bring in the main villains and show them off and show what they're up to. The ones we get introduced to mostly are the minions of the main antagonist. We get to see what it is like inside this walled off world and how different everything is there. Things have reverted back to a semi-medieval state there but technology has advanced to a traditional sci-fi level. Think Star Wars. 
The main thing we see is how afraid even the toughest of these supermen are of their leader and what daily rituals they have to put up with. Including a daily sacrifice of 1 male and 1 female human slave. 
The chapter also reveals that the bounty PR picked up in the prologue and 1st chapter was working for them and that they've managed to salvage his remains" and have had it brought to them. Also, a hint at a plan finally coming together saying that they have some inside the flying fortress of the Super Police.

6.) This chapter picks up about a week after the last one that fallowed PR and crew. The Zodiac sisters have arrived and been inducted in by now and they are part of PR's team. Here we get their introduction in the form in the form of Pr relating why he chose to bring them in to the Officer that 1st brought him up while they are doing a combat drills in a jungle setting against the 2 sisters.
We learn that he met them on bounty in South America years ago when the 2 were still mostly human and it was on this mission that the 2 were injured and lead to their transformation into the cyborgs they are now.
In this story I want there to be kind of a Predator parody. To the point PR might even be in a mock predator style getup.
It will end with PR and the Officer loosing to Scorpia and Cancer in this exorcise.

7.) This chapter takes places sometime later on. PR has been assigned to lead a team of other recruits and his own team consisting of Angelik, Ella, Bradley, Scorpia, and Cancer. 
They've been sent in to investigate why a town has stopped communicating with the rest of the world. They find the town is deserted with no signs of survivors except a single child(all Newt from Aliens style). The child tells them that a strange man came to town one day and slowly after that people just started vanishing til just suddenly no one was left.
PR decides they should stay the night in the town and investigate more the next day. That night they are attacked by the town's inhabitants who've been transformed into zombie-like vampires. Things go horribly wrong from here.
One of PR's team members(one of the recruits) gets bitten and starts to change and goes insane(it is very dangerous and unpredictable what will happen when a super gets bitten or changed by a fairy folk member like vampires or werewolves) causing him to start attacking and slaughtering the others and PR in a desperate attempt to save the others activates a bomb that is standard inclusion with these types of deployments and tries using his teleportation ability to send the others to safety.
The chapter ends with Angie, Bradley, Ella, and the Zodiacs rushing back after the massive explosion into the epicenter to find a still barely alive PackRat with all his skin burned away and his internal organs are hanging out.

8.) This one opens with PR is the infirmary on-board the fortress in a tube full of some sort of liquid floating with an oxygen mask on over his face (help keeping it obscured too) and IVs and wires coming off his chest and limbs. The scientist/doctor overseeing his treatment is talking with Angelik and Bradley about his condition mentioning how quickly he is recovering thanks to the substance they've placed him in. (I want it stated this is something that Bradley and them have done before when PR has been injured and that the ooze isn't a product of the Police Force, but something that PR and them developed to speed up his healing factors. It is a mixture of the base elements he needs to rebuild damaged tissue.)
From there we see Angelik sitting alone in a chair waiting next to the tube when one of the surviving recruits from the mission comes in and notices her sitting there. The 2 start talking when the recruit ask Angelik about how she (being the daughter of such a high ranking person such as her father) ended up with PR.
We then go into a flash back sequence where we learn Angie's back story. We learn that she was the result of her father having an at the time unnatural affair with a neko house maid. The 2 were married and she was born into wealth and raised spoiled and pampered. To the point she on her 15th or 16th birthday wanted a friends only trip down to South America(this would've been sometime late in the 1970's-80's) and while down there she and her friends are lead to a rave out in the boondocks where they're drugged and taken prisoner. They're sold to a slave trader and kept in horrible conditions for a year or 2.
when they're finally rescued it is by PR who was hired by Angelik's farther to track them down. He finds them frees them and then mercilessly slaughters anyone and everyone that works for the slaver rink except the leader whom he captures and brings back with the surviving girls to Angie's dad who has the man crucified. Afterwards Angelik having developed a hero-worship for PR for saving her runs off and fallows PR around the world for a couple years till she get involved in a mission he is on and ends up helping him out and he then willingly allows her to stay with him and Bradley. Where he begins to teach her some skills that she eventually surpasses him in(such as archery and aertal combat).
The chapter ends with her revealing something secretly to the recruit before we fallow the recruit leaving her to sit and watch over PR's medical tube...

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  • Listening to: ICP/Kottonmouth Kings
  • Reading: DeadPool, Authority, Alan Moore, old trades!
  • Watching: Futurama, Ugly Americans, Adventure Time, MLP...
  • Playing: nothing....
  • Eating: Complete crap!
  • Drinking: Aways Coca Cola!
To my Fans & Friends


All right. Haven't done this in a while... I'm not sure if I feel like, but I'll try.
I've been tagged by :iconCzarnaArcher: with a tag that I already done before, but, ahh hell, why not.

RULES:
Post the rules.
Write 10 things about yourself.
Answer 10 questions.
No tag back.
Tag 10 people, manually by informing them and mentioning them in the post.
I don't feel like typing any more rules.


10 Things about me.

1. I'm a completely Atheist! 
2. If given the chance I'd hit the Doomsday button at the drop of a hat!
 

3. I've got depression and anxiety but am untreated due to lack of money... 
4. I've been out of work since April...
5. I haven't drawn in several months due to I just can't get in the right mind set...
6. I like a lot of movies people tend to hate and hate movies everyone else seems to love!
7. I'm over $400 in debt to the IRS with only about a $100 in my bank account...
8. I'm living with my mom and step-dad.
9. My political views are strange to most and far too complicated to go into detail without me writing a book to explain them...  But basically both sides can go  themselves!
10. I'm a Sadist!

10. Answers:
1. How long are you on dA.

Since I think 2007?
2. Oranges or apples?
I like both but given the choice now I'd like an nice orange!
3. Robert Plant or Marilyn Manson?
Manson!
4. Do you like Monthy Phyton's Flying Circus?'
Bits and pieces!  But not the whole show!
5. Do you read comic books?

6. How global economy changes in XXth century influenced various societies worldwide?

7. How world wide web changed the international society?

8. Say: "W Szczebrzeszynie Chrząszcz brzmi w trzcinie i Strzebrzeszyn z tego słynie"; how did it go?


Not good!
9. I say: "wood", what say you?
Only half!
10. Horror films or comedies?
Horror Comedies!
en.wikipedia.org/wiki/List_of_…

My questions? Hmmm...
1. How do I know you?
2. What do you think of the show "Big Bang Theory"?
3. What is your favorite comic book based movie?
4. What is the worst thing about me you do not like?
5. What is a weird skill you got that is unique to you?
6. What is the most horrifying thing you can think of?
7. Now take whatever you said above and make it into a movie and who would you have star in it?
8. What is the most painful thing that's happened to you?
9. If given the chance what is the one change you would make to the whole world?  Whatever it is it effects everyone, everywhere!
10. What's the funniest image you can find?

Who I nominate? No one actually, but people I will mention now may feel nominated if they want.

:iconPumpkin-Queen-Ildi::iconpewterkat::icongorexs::iconsplaty::iconriver-hrossa::iconferalcheetah46::icontimmywheeler::iconicex1982::icondevilmanozzy::iconscorpionskissx::iconpopcorn-panic: anyone I know from FA is welcome too...

Thank you.

Pecking Order:
6. There's  the People! 

people in different lines of work

5. The Dirt!

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4. The Worms inside the Dirt!
  
  

3. Mr. BooRat's Stool!

2. Whatever God(s) they pray to!

1. Then BooRat!
  
  

 
 
  • Listening to: ICP/Kottonmouth Kings
  • Reading: DeadPool, Authority, Alan Moore, old trades!
  • Watching: Futurama, Ugly Americans, Adventure Time, MLP...
  • Playing: nothing....
  • Eating: Complete crap!
  • Drinking: Aways Coca Cola!
So, what do ya'll think of this idea? Do any of ya'll know an artist that can pull this off?

I've recently have really gotten back into watching Dragon Ball Z(Dragonball Z aka DBZ) sort of by watching the web comedy series called Dragon Ball Z Abridged www.youtube.com/watch?v=MkhfXM… by Team Four Star on YouTube. I've also found and started reading Dragon Ball Multiverse www.dragonball-multiverse.com online. And decided to try and sorta redo an old drawing I did some years ago.
It was of my OC(PackRat) but in the earlier design I've long since have changed and dropped some concepts (Such as the oversized left foot, spiked left elbow, smooth texture right arm, and poker themes hat band, ect...). I drew him in a mash up of Saiyan armor designs and in the DBZ art style aka Akira Toriyama's
dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Akir… art style! My new idea is basically sort of a remake of this but as a group shot!
I want a picture of PackRat with Angelik, Ella Diabla/PR-R63, Bradley, Chesh, Scorpia, andCancer all together like a movie poster or a team pose like the Ginyu Force dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Giny… did, but not as flamboyant since this team is at least more than 50% made up of females!
The exact position of each character I've not decided on yet. I don't want it to be based on a preexisting one from the show or movies. I do want it to showcase all the characters as much as possible with as little of them being overlapped and hiding parts of one another.


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BooRat
William Joeseph Blackshire
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This is me as of April 2011!

Current Residence: Nacogdoches, Tx
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Favourite style of art: Fantacy/Horror, erotic
Favourite cartoon character: Warden, Rusty, Murderface, Kenny, Brock, Alphonse, Bender, Grenader, Max
Personal Quote: Nullum Magnum Ingenium Sine Mixtura Dementiae
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  • Listening to: ICP/Kottonmouth Kings
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  • Watching: Futurama, Ugly Americans, Adventure Time, MLP...
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  • Eating: Complete crap!
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Prologue: Hot Texas Wasteland Nights
Characters: Rich Business Man(not named yet), Miss. Noh(zombie queen and lover to PR), Creepy Clerk(works for mutants), Zombies/Mutants, Dead Driver(murdered by the business man shortly before the story begins), and PackRat(gaint mutant rat man/"hero").
Setting(s): In a west Texas wasteland mostly, an old motel, and flashes of a futuristic California or New York(not sure yet)
Mood/Tone(s): Creepy, Suspense, Horror, Shock, and Terror... And finally Comedy!
Time Frame: It takes place over 1-3 Days at most.
POV(s): 3rd person most likely PackRat.
Plot Summery: A business man is running from the "Police Force" and try to escape down into South America so he can try to escape to the "The Other Nation" with stolen money, data, ect. And, he runs into wasteland mutants/zombies at an old motel in the middle of nowhere in West Texas.
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Chapter 1: Night at the Inferno
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Prologue: Set just before the main story we fallow a rich mid-late thirties businessman on the run driving a steadily breaking down limo in a desert. We learn through his in monologue some bit of this worlds history such as this is taking place some time in the 2400-2600's and it is post 2 World Wars, the outing of fairy tale creatures, an alien arrival, a zombie outbreak, and a few new world orders. We learn that this man was caught sailing weaponry and info to a foreign enemies of the city-state he's from(a future New York City) and now he is wanted by the authorities and a local crime family mafia.
We also learn that since then he has killed his driver due to mounting paranoia and has taken over driving and is now lost in the desert wastelands in-between the walled off states of New York and Texas on his way to South America where he hopes to get a boat to the nation he was caught sailing weaponry to for protection.
When his limo finally breaks down from a mixture of his inability to drive and running out of gas. The man abandons it in the sand and is left dragging 3 huge gym bags full of cash money, papers, documents, and CDs til around dark he comes across a shady old tourist trap style motel in the middle of nowhere. There he runs into the creepy old desk-clerk, pays for a room and goes to rest for the night, and he thinks he is safe. But, he wakes up just a few hours later around midnight or so to find that he's been captured by a tribe of zombie/mutants(not sure what to actually call them but they're un-dead and some are deformed) they have him tied-up nude to an old bed. From his inner monologue we learn the history of these mutant/zombies as he knows it. Here we meet the leader of these zombie/mutants a woman in her late thirties early forties who is introduced nude in a bathtub full of embalming fluid. She's called "Ms. Noh" because she's wearing a Noh mask. She proceeds to monologue about how beautiful she was before she "died" then removing her mask showing that even though she is perfectly preserved from the neck down her head is mummified. She processed to do a whole dominatrix routine on the guy and this goes on with-in thee story for hours til morning. 
As soon as the sun comes up a knock comes to the motel room and Ms. Noh sends one of her minions to answer it when the door comes flying off the hinges killing the minion. And, in steps our main character PackRat armed with his hammer and shield. He knows Ms. Noh and tells her to call off her minions before he kills them all. She complies and they talk a bit and come to an agreement in-which PackRat gets the businessman for the bounty on his head. The guy is grateful that he's getting away from the zombies when PR reveals that he the bounty he took for him wasn't the one issued by the police but the crime family and there were stipulations for it. And this story ends with the man's screams being heard fro outside the motel...

1.) This chapter picks right up after the Prologue with PackRat driving back to his home after dropping off what was left of the businessman to a station setup for bounty-hunters to turn in their bounties for money. Through PR's inner dialogue we'll learn since the States are now only in a low level Union because of the vast wastelands in-between each of the major areas these stations were setup for prisoner transfers for out of state criminals. Also, in the backseat of his vehicle just to let the audience know what he done to the man we can see bloody towels and bits of meat including fingers and toes and possibly a tongue.
On his way back home we learn a bit about PR such as his routines, job, and how long he's been around. Once he gets home we learn his place is a shady club/bar in the middle of this small East Texas town that he protects from the wasteland inhabitants in return for them allowing him and his followers to stay there un-harassed. 
Once inside we see it is a strip club/bar where we are introduced to his friend and oldest partner Bradley O'Brien an Irish Goblin who is his manager, mechanic, weapon-smith, and the paperwork guy. PackRat gives him the check the bounty and ask him if "Angie and Diabla have gone on yet" to which he is delighted that he is not too late before taking his seat in-front of the stage.
Here we meet Angelik the Angelic Catgirl(PR's mate) and Ella Diabla the Succubus(the 2's mutual girlfriend) as they do a live strip show. We learn here a little bit about Angelik and Ella from PR's inner thoughts like how long he's known them and why he likes them so much before he's interrupted by noticing he's being stared at from across the room. The person staring at him is a larger man in a trench-coat and PR knows something is up simply by the fact he is completely ignoring the show on stage to be watching him. PR calls Bradley over and gets him to send one of the bouncers over to check the guy out. This causes a scene which is all the evidence/provocation PR needs to attack the guy. But to his surprise the guy isn't a normal human. He is a member of the superhuman world police force(Still haven't decided on a name for them yet) who has come there for PR. The 2 of them fight going through walls and ending up in the parking lot of the club, the middle of the streets, and finally the middle of the town before the 2 have had enough. And the Officer reveals his purpose in coming after PR and that is to recruit/draft him. End of Chapter 1!

2.) This chapter opens up with where the last one left off with PR and this Officer of the superhuman world police standing in the middle of the rubble of their fight. The officer tells him that the organization he belongs to has been aware of him for years now and have finally decided it was time to recruit/draft him in. He proves this by sharing some info on PR that no one should know and this info is also used as a threat against him if he doesn't comply. (I was thinking it should be his killings he's committed in the past and war crimes he did during the wars) PR agrees to come along peacefully and quietly but only if his team comes along too. The Officer reluctantly agrees.
He takes them all back to the headquarters in his special vehicle(I love to make homages to stuff I like from movies and comics in this so I was thinking of making it a flying car like the ones used in old SHIELD comics from Marvel). The headquarters is a giant floating fortress high above the cloud-line in the sky. Once they dock we see how much better off these super-beings live on this floating fortress as the place is very ornately designed on the inside like the elevator PR and the others take from the docking bay the main lobby/hall of the place is the size of the average apartment most common people live in and has stuff in it like a chandelier(sp?) and a fish tank. (Before they get to the elevator though I'd like a scene for comedy for the most part in-which the Officer ask PR to relinquish all his weapons before they go any deeper into the fortress. And we see him pulling all these knives, throwing stars, tiny guns from poaches and hidden places on him before he reveals one of his main powers the ability to store weapons inside his body and he gives up his swords, hammer, shield, and main guns.) Once we reach the main hall we see crowds of mutated(in a good way... somewhat) super-beings all in brightly colored costumes and all around them are hundreds of booths and kiosk as this main hall is basically a really large airport like terminal/super-mall setup with restaurants and stores. 
The Officer leads them through the crowds to a large door marked "Secure Personal Only" that leads them to a secret elevator that is much more smaller and more a sterile classic generic type. It takes them to another classic and generic darkly lit room where we meet the leaders of this police force. I'm thinking somewhere between 7 ans 13 members and making most of them either archetypes based of like the Avengers or Justice League. They all introduce themselves and we learn one member of this council is in-fact Angelik's dad as the rep for their people in the organization.
From there we get them revealing what they know on PR and why they want him to join them. They reveal through their research that they've figured out that PR is an escaped earlier attempt at creating a super-soldier back in WW2in the 1940s like them but through unknown means was transported into the past explaining why he is so long lived and yet has a bunch of modern abilities. (I'd have the Iron Man/Batman style character would reveal through a bunch of pseudoscience speech how he figures it happened) Then they discuss why they want him to join. That they believe there is another like him out there and "it" is the one leading the opposition(a modern Nazi-like party that resides in a the world's largest walled off area that takes up most of Eastern Europe and Asia). They reveal that they hope to use PR's abilities to sneak in and try to bring down this opponent from the inside as the way this leader has things set up in this mega-country only super-beings can exist there and only those with high power levels. Most notably due to there are no direct entries into the wall you need a teleporter (machine or being with that power to get in)
We end on a blurred satellite image of this tyrant and it is a large(10-12 foot tall) armored being but the most notable thing is a small gap in the armor around one of the joints shows a tiny bit of green skin...

3.) PackRat agrees to stay and do the job but he has conditions(such as he wants tenure/rank and that his crew and him all get to join and get their own living quarters to themselves. Also, he wants a few of his fellow bounty hunters to be brought in from Earth such as 2 other characters I created Scorpia and Cancer the Zodiac sisters) to which the council all agree some of them more reluctantly than others(Angie's dad). From here the council leave them to be lead off to begin their induction into the corp.
Bradley and PR are lead off for the male test and Angie and Ella are taken for the female testing. This sequence would be mostly comical as we'd get to see different things ranging from them doing a physical on them both(Brad and PR) to testing their power and weakness levels. Such as Bradley not liking being poked and prodded during the physical and PR's not caring one bit. A scene of the doctor/scientist in-charge of running the test on PR being in shock of his physiology as he has basically like twice-three times as many bones and organs in his body as a human. We get them testing his powers and him showing what he can do so we learn things like PR's ability to teleport is powerful but it has a major draw back in that it causes him terrible pain to do so, his healing ability works very slowly, and that he has a severe allergy to heavy metals. And, we learn from PR's inner dialogue he was holding back on some test and he didn't reveal everything he can do because knowledge is power. 
After we're done with the montage of test on the guys all of PR's crew are gathered back together in a waiting room waiting for their test results and for them to finish up with Bradley when PR notices that Angie is acting nervous, but she won't say way. When Bradley returns it is announced they all passed the test required to be allowed in for the most part even though they wouldn't allow some into combat anytime soon hinting heavily to Angie, but PR ignores it as her dad's interference. 
From here they're lead to their quarters and PR is shocked and a little annoyed to see that in the time it took them from agreeing to join and the test they've gone through that the organization has moved all his stuff from his place back on Earth up to the fortress.
The chapter ends with Angie stating she doesn't want to share their bed that night...

4.) This chapter opens with the crew being woken up early the next day. PR has opted to sleep by himself and allow Angie and Ella to have the bed as per her request the night before. PR is annoyed from a mixture of this and being woke up so early. They're being woke up because their new uniforms are ready and they're expected to meet up with the trainers to get started on more test to see what fields they'll be best suited for. PR takes the uniforms and starts making changes to them before handing them over to their others and they get ready.
They are ready and meet up in a training are awaiting where we see what PR has done to the suits. Most trimmed up the girl's suits and his own. The drill instructors aren't pleased with this but bight the bullet for the most part since they've got orders from above to treat this group with kid-gloves because of PR's demands. 
We fallow PR as he goes through more test and see how good and bad he is at some thing like his swordsman ship is not up to par he just uses them more as giant meat cleavers and has no real former training with them and that the more well trained swordsmen can easily disarm him in strait combat, but he is a decent marksman but not a good sniper. We also see he is not a trained in any forms of martial arts (also has anger issues) and that a real trained combatant could take him is he doesn't cheat. The only reason he's wins a lot of hand to hand fights is mostly thanks to his higher than average strength and his physiology allowing him to have higher endurance. (Basically I want him owning a few of the new and some more senior recruits he is placed with in this training but getting his ass kicked by the instructors and masters in these respected fields... maybe having the Batman-esk analogue be one of them. The only time he lands a hit on him is when he just looses his cool completely and powers through an attack but even then all he does is maybe scratch his cheek.)
After all that we cut to PR's crew gathering at one of the restaurants in the main hall areas for breakfast/lunch. They're talking about how some like it up here and PR is annoyed he agreed to stay when another member of the higher ups maybe another council members shows up to take them on a further tour of the place. Mostly they're doing this to help relax them to the place and they're aware of how PR is starting to resent them on this 1st day so they're calling off the rest of the day's test and training.
He/she(not sure which one to use yet but there is a part I want to include and I might put it in this part of the story and it requires a female member and a lesbian... basically a Wonder Woman analogue. I want a scene where he tries hitting on her and she is a powerhouse member with like very high strength levels and he annoys her to the point she punches him through a few walls.) takes them deeper into the inner-workings of the fortress. She takes them through the prison to show them the types of people they'll be going up against and here is where we get a scene I've wanted to do too where one of the prisoners tried to grab one of the girls(Ella and Angie to be precise) and PR snaps the guy's arm and nearly tries removing it before he;s stopped. 
Then we get to see cold storage and see "super-villains" so terrible they are kept frozen and are being reprogrammed ala "Demolition Man" style while they're asleep. Here the guild kind of not so suddenly hints at this is where PR might end up if he didn't agree to work with them. While here also we're introduced sort of to some of the main enemy's creations like more advanced super-beings that are more monstrous than anything we've seen so far.
Lastly we see on this tour is something that does 100% show us that this Police Force is not as noble as they like to act as past the cold storage we go into a special room that is revealed to be just outside part of the engine room where is kept a special case super-being/mutation. A 12-15 year old boy who is the offspring of 2 powerful super-beings that was born with a speedster ability(he can run really fast like almost light speed) and an infinite amount of energy, but was born with severe mental problem that has left him for the most part brain dead so he is always running at top speed. So they basically made him into a power source to run the ship running on a large treadmill...

5.) This chapter is the 1st to break away from PR and his friends and what is happening with them. It is the 1st to bring in the main villains and show them off and show what they're up to. The ones we get introduced to mostly are the minions of the main antagonist. We get to see what it is like inside this walled off world and how different everything is there. Things have reverted back to a semi-medieval state there but technology has advanced to a traditional sci-fi level. Think Star Wars. 
The main thing we see is how afraid even the toughest of these supermen are of their leader and what daily rituals they have to put up with. Including a daily sacrifice of 1 male and 1 female human slave. 
The chapter also reveals that the bounty PR picked up in the prologue and 1st chapter was working for them and that they've managed to salvage his remains" and have had it brought to them. Also, a hint at a plan finally coming together saying that they have some inside the flying fortress of the Super Police.

6.) This chapter picks up about a week after the last one that fallowed PR and crew. The Zodiac sisters have arrived and been inducted in by now and they are part of PR's team. Here we get their introduction in the form in the form of Pr relating why he chose to bring them in to the Officer that 1st brought him up while they are doing a combat drills in a jungle setting against the 2 sisters.
We learn that he met them on bounty in South America years ago when the 2 were still mostly human and it was on this mission that the 2 were injured and lead to their transformation into the cyborgs they are now.
In this story I want there to be kind of a Predator parody. To the point PR might even be in a mock predator style getup.
It will end with PR and the Officer loosing to Scorpia and Cancer in this exorcise.

7.) This chapter takes places sometime later on. PR has been assigned to lead a team of other recruits and his own team consisting of Angelik, Ella, Bradley, Scorpia, and Cancer. 
They've been sent in to investigate why a town has stopped communicating with the rest of the world. They find the town is deserted with no signs of survivors except a single child(all Newt from Aliens style). The child tells them that a strange man came to town one day and slowly after that people just started vanishing til just suddenly no one was left.
PR decides they should stay the night in the town and investigate more the next day. That night they are attacked by the town's inhabitants who've been transformed into zombie-like vampires. Things go horribly wrong from here.
One of PR's team members(one of the recruits) gets bitten and starts to change and goes insane(it is very dangerous and unpredictable what will happen when a super gets bitten or changed by a fairy folk member like vampires or werewolves) causing him to start attacking and slaughtering the others and PR in a desperate attempt to save the others activates a bomb that is standard inclusion with these types of deployments and tries using his teleportation ability to send the others to safety.
The chapter ends with Angie, Bradley, Ella, and the Zodiacs rushing back after the massive explosion into the epicenter to find a still barely alive PackRat with all his skin burned away and his internal organs are hanging out.

8.) This one opens with PR is the infirmary on-board the fortress in a tube full of some sort of liquid floating with an oxygen mask on over his face (help keeping it obscured too) and IVs and wires coming off his chest and limbs. The scientist/doctor overseeing his treatment is talking with Angelik and Bradley about his condition mentioning how quickly he is recovering thanks to the substance they've placed him in. (I want it stated this is something that Bradley and them have done before when PR has been injured and that the ooze isn't a product of the Police Force, but something that PR and them developed to speed up his healing factors. It is a mixture of the base elements he needs to rebuild damaged tissue.)
From there we see Angelik sitting alone in a chair waiting next to the tube when one of the surviving recruits from the mission comes in and notices her sitting there. The 2 start talking when the recruit ask Angelik about how she (being the daughter of such a high ranking person such as her father) ended up with PR.
We then go into a flash back sequence where we learn Angie's back story. We learn that she was the result of her father having an at the time unnatural affair with a neko house maid. The 2 were married and she was born into wealth and raised spoiled and pampered. To the point she on her 15th or 16th birthday wanted a friends only trip down to South America(this would've been sometime late in the 1970's-80's) and while down there she and her friends are lead to a rave out in the boondocks where they're drugged and taken prisoner. They're sold to a slave trader and kept in horrible conditions for a year or 2.
when they're finally rescued it is by PR who was hired by Angelik's farther to track them down. He finds them frees them and then mercilessly slaughters anyone and everyone that works for the slaver rink except the leader whom he captures and brings back with the surviving girls to Angie's dad who has the man crucified. Afterwards Angelik having developed a hero-worship for PR for saving her runs off and fallows PR around the world for a couple years till she get involved in a mission he is on and ends up helping him out and he then willingly allows her to stay with him and Bradley. Where he begins to teach her some skills that she eventually surpasses him in(such as archery and aertal combat).
The chapter ends with her revealing something secretly to the recruit before we fallow the recruit leaving her to sit and watch over PR's medical tube...

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